Week 9 Story: Polyphemus

Polyphemus growled slightly to himself as he walked back to the cave he had made into his home. It had been a long day. Everything on the island was provided by the gods—the sheep, the fish in the ocean surrounding them, the drinkable water, the fertile soil, the shelters. However, the upkeep needed to live off those things was done by the Cyclopses’ themselves. Today, Polyphemus had been helping one of the other Cyclops’ mend fishing nets, and his hands still ached from the labor. He flexed and then extended his fingers, trying to get the muscles to relax. Then, a few of the sheep that belonged in Polyphemus’ flock had veered away from the others for no discernible reason. Polyphemus had had to chase them down, and even though he was a Cyclops (and thus, a giant), traipsing all over the island cliffs for hours was not his idea of fun. After he had finally herded the sheep who had veered away back to the larger flock, one of the younger Cyclopses had done something while trying to make wine—Polyphemus still did not know what—and gotten smashed grapes all over her cave. She had been trying to keep the sheep out of the cave long enough to clean it up when Polyphemus had passed. He had bellowed for help, and the other Cyclopses came to their aid. Even though everything necessary for their survival had been provided by the gods, they still had to look out for each other.

Polyphemus sighed, cracking his neck. He prayed the gods would take pity on him and leave something nice for him in his cave. Perhaps dinner that he did not have to catch, because he did not think he had it in him to go hunting or fishing right now, and the only thing in his cave was wine and cheese. Polyphemus slowed to a stop, head tilting to the side as he took in the very small footprints leading into the darkness of his cave. Perhaps wine and cheese were not the only things in his cave. Polyphemus entered his home, making sure to block the entrance with the boulder that served as his door before moving away. He did not want whatever gift the gods had sent him getting scared and running away before Polyphemus had a chance to see them. Polyphemus raised his eyebrow as he took in the sight before him. There were small…people, in his cave. They were less than half his height! The gods must have brought them here for a reason. But what? They could not herd the sheep. They were not large enough to navigate the cliffs quickly enough. They could not fish. They would be dwarfed by the nets. One of the tiny people was speaking to him, but they were so small and so quiet that he could not hear them. Well, he had been praying for an easy dinner. The gods must have brought these humans to him to eat. Polyphemus sighed. This is not exactly what he had been intending, but Polyphemus was not going to be the one that got the Cyclopses kicked off the island because he had offended the gods by not appreciating their gifts. He moved forward, arms outstretched, ready to catch and eat the humans.





Author’s Note: So, in the Iliad, Homer makes a point of telling us that everything on the island of the Cyclopses is provided by the gods. The Cyclopses know this. I was thinking about the story of Polyphemus and Odysseus and decided to go in this direction. In The Iliad, Polyphemus is portrayed as a cannibalistic monster who kills and eats Odysseus' men because he wants to. In my story, I tried t make him more sympathetic, as well as give him more of a backstory. Polyphemus does not necessarily want to eat Odysseus and his men, but Greek mythology is full of terrible stories of people who spurned the gods.

Bibliography: Homer's Odyssey, translated by Tony Kline

                                                                        Polyphemus

Comments

  1. Hi Cady, great job with this story! The angle you took of telling this classic story from the cyclops's perspective is so creative. I like that you made an effort to keep the story close to the original even with the new perspective, basing the cyclops's thought process on the fact that everything on the island is provided by the gods. This story is shorter than the ones I usually end up reading and writing in this class (unless it's microfiction), so it was a refreshing to get the whole story in a shorter amount of time. If you end up editing this story, I noticed that cyclopses is possessive when it doesn't need to be, and there was a typo (missing "o" in "to") in the author's note. You also might want to add some more details to the events in the first paragraph, because I was a little confused what was happening with the sheep and the wine. Was that something from the original story? Overall, I really enjoyed reading this and thought it was so creative! Great job.

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  2. Hey Cady,
    You did a really nice job with this story. I really enjoyed that you dove into the origins of Polymephus for this story. I think it was a nice touch and it made for a great adaptation of the story of Odysseus and his men, which happens to be one of my favorite stories so far as well. I think you did a good of making the antagonist sympathetic, or I guess in your case the protagonist since you focused on Polymephus. Overall, this was a really great story, keep up the good work!

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  3. Cady,
    What an entertaining story! I find Polymephus' attitude very humorous. He's like *sigh.. again?* Even the ending when he asked the gods for a little snack and a 'little snack' quite literally appeared in his cave, his response was so funny to me. "Come on, man.. these bony little things?" You really turned a cannibalistic monster into a chill giant. What a good story!

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  4. Hi Cady,
    That was a very fun story. I would not have thought of that, but your story brings up an interesting idea. I imagine it would be hard for a giant to hear humans speaking. Based on what we know of Odysseus, it is very possible that the gods did send his crew there for the cyclops to eat. He has a tendency to offend the gods.

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